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AHHHH! it ends at a really nice point that makes it very alluring like i want to read more. but, if there was more i probably wouldnt like it as much (as in it doesnt need more) because you get to imagine what happens next. it isnt like some cliff hangers where it can only go in one direction, because you know he'll probably go to the group, but after that... anyway, very nice job. the style alows for any visual messyness, and the coloring is very nice it adds good atmosphere.
i like the pressure of the 24 hour thing. it doesnt let people over anylize or overthink it into ruining a good simple thing.